In the heart of Fatum’s maze,
She strives for a soulless life.
Blackened days and dirtied nights-
With a gift of wretched destiny.
No voice, no sigh,
Screaming, her silent shouts-
All echo in Night’s glade,
With a gift of wretched destiny.
A flower in a bouquet,
Petals plucked in delicacy.
Life is now an empty dream,
With a gift of wretched destiny.
Spent and tarnished, a slave of fate
Forced to lend herself to all.
Weaving a soiled tapestry of life,
With a gift of wretched destiny.
Suffocated in this blissful world.
Used yet savoured by vultures around.
Bearing the silent suffering of mortality,
With a gift of wretched destiny.
Beads of innocence brimming in eyes,
Camouflaged by a smile of self-pity.
Languished in life, chained to pain,
With a gift of wretched destiny.
-VAISAKHI MISHRA
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ReplyDeletea beautiful write up...nice...expressive...and to call it a gift... :)
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I wondering how come u guys write poems like this ..Hmmmm creative !!Thx for this post
ReplyDeletepainful soul expressed with delicacy. the cry was beautiful. thanks for letting us read a lovely poem.
ReplyDelete@eon-thanx...n ya gift was like a pun...sarcastic truth...:)...glad u liked it...
ReplyDelete@sheril and fantacy-thanku so much....pleasure is mine u read my work n like it...so its like i m thankful...:)
ReplyDeleteyes, I can see how 'destiny' can be wretched. your words expressed the pain very well.
ReplyDeletewonderful write!
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I am getting shivers up my spine while reading this..you are so good,I have never up till date read something so amazing regarding rape..keep on writing.
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depicting the pain of lonely soul u have written amazing
ReplyDelete@hope, alpana and some unspoken words- thanku so much....glad u guys liked it...:)
ReplyDelete@rachit-glad u liked it...:)...thanx 4 the visit...n welcome to my blog...
ReplyDeleteI love this one...the emotions are depicted beautifully !
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Wow di...but the English was a bit more than tough for me to understand at times..but thanks to the dictionary :P
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@fatima-thanx a ton...n girl plz study now...blog s here forever...:)...best of luck...
ReplyDelete@aaminah-thanku dear...happy to see u back...n well as far as english is concerned i m tryin to may it simpler each time...so dont worry...n ya dictionary is always a good accompanist...:)
ReplyDeleteand ur blog...surely will visit...tat goes widout sayin...;)
That was a beautiful wrap of emotions and fear concealed in words ! I loved the flow and somehow the words replicated the deep fear , many girls bury inside them !
ReplyDeleteSo sad poem.....Beautiful write..:)
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@adreamygal-thanku...glad u liked it...true this destiny is a nightmare yet a reality for man unfortunate girls....
ReplyDeletep.s.-thanx 4 ur visit n follow....welcome to my blog...:)
@valli- thanx...:)
ReplyDeleteA gift to be cherished of wretched destiny.. :)
ReplyDeleteNice lines :) :)
Cheers,
@tanvi-thanx....:)
ReplyDeleteThe words were beautiful and each one as expressive as the previous one :)
ReplyDeleteThough i don't believe in this word called destiny yet your write up did come to make sense in my head a and ring something..
@alcina-thanku...:)
ReplyDeleteWell expressed - Wretched Destiny!
ReplyDelete@serendipity-thanx..:)
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