Eloping from mist and cloud
Of a ruthless stony fort,
I fly back to that green glade,
Where time has frozen for me.
You gave your heart, for me to keep;
And took my soul away.
Aware of the fate, my warrior seeks,
My Elfish heart still beats for you.
Abandoned by tears, captivated by grief;
Hope dancing on my window sill.
I wait for you to return for me,
And relive that day for eternity.
Pity by sun and remorse by moon,
Winds blow with mocked sympathy.
I regret not my choice, knowing you’ll return,
For love is more powerful than anything.
-VAISAKHI MISHRA
prompt-the image, courtesy allpoetry.com
prompt-the image, courtesy allpoetry.com
love indeed is more powerful than anything....
ReplyDeletenice one Vaisakhi :)
A touch of classics huh.. :)
ReplyDeleteWould have loved more pain in the story though..
Keep penning
aJ
Loved it dear...love does have the power to make the inevitable happen!
ReplyDeleteNice read :)
TC
beautiful! your feeling are well expressed in this. great write! I've never seen an image change like that. awesome!
ReplyDeletebeautifully potrayed....loved it. Love is more power than anything and it has the power to conquer everything :)
ReplyDeletetouching :) ... love is life
ReplyDelete@SUB-thanku....:)
ReplyDelete@aakash-hmm pain....sure next time...:)
ReplyDelete@fatima-hehe hmm love make the inevitbl happns....:)))....thanx 4 likin it...:)....n plz stop doubtin me...:)
ReplyDelete@hope-thanku so much....n ya the pic is wat caught my attention....one of my fav movies...lotr...:)
ReplyDelete@bhavna-glad u liked it....n thanx 4 the visit...:)
ReplyDelete@saheer-thanx...hmm yup love is life...:)
ReplyDeleteClassic...Loved it!
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ReplyDeletereminded me of so manyt hings all at once...felt as if i was re reading something...relived a few moments...
:)
nice...
Regards,
Eon...
@saru-thanx....:)
ReplyDelete@eon-glad u felt connected....ok so postin it wasnt a bad idea atall...:)
ReplyDeletei so loved the positive aura in this!
ReplyDelete@sawan-thanku for visitin my blog....n glad u liked it...:)
ReplyDeleteHmmm....donno if its the words the underlying emotions or that I could relate to it... or all put together.. I loved this post! :)
ReplyDeleteI hope that the soldier of fortune does not make the damsel wait for long.
ReplyDeleteNice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@manshaa-:)...no matter wat it was i m just glad u liked it...:)
ReplyDelete@BA-haha hope the soldier considers ur words...:)
ReplyDeleteIt's lovely...The ultimate power in world..Love..keep on the belief :)
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@alcina-heyya....welcome back...n glad u liked it...:)
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