Sunday, September 4, 2011

Wait and Belief...




Eloping from mist and cloud
Of a ruthless stony fort,
I fly back to that green glade,
Where time has frozen for me.                  

You gave your heart, for me to keep;
And took my soul away.
Aware of the fate, my warrior seeks,
My Elfish heart still beats for you.

Abandoned by tears, captivated by grief;
Hope dancing on my window sill.
I wait for you to return for me,
And relive that day for eternity.

Pity by sun and remorse by moon,
Winds blow with mocked sympathy.
I regret not my choice, knowing you’ll return,
For love is more powerful than anything.

-VAISAKHI MISHRA


prompt-the image, courtesy allpoetry.com

28 comments:

  1. love indeed is more powerful than anything....
    nice one Vaisakhi :)

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  2. A touch of classics huh.. :)
    Would have loved more pain in the story though..
    Keep penning

    aJ

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  3. Loved it dear...love does have the power to make the inevitable happen!

    Nice read :)

    TC

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  4. beautiful! your feeling are well expressed in this. great write! I've never seen an image change like that. awesome!

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  5. beautifully potrayed....loved it. Love is more power than anything and it has the power to conquer everything :)

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  6. @aakash-hmm pain....sure next time...:)

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  7. @fatima-hehe hmm love make the inevitbl happns....:)))....thanx 4 likin it...:)....n plz stop doubtin me...:)

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  8. @hope-thanku so much....n ya the pic is wat caught my attention....one of my fav movies...lotr...:)

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  9. @bhavna-glad u liked it....n thanx 4 the visit...:)

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  10. @saheer-thanx...hmm yup love is life...:)

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  11. Hey, Hi

    reminded me of so manyt hings all at once...felt as if i was re reading something...relived a few moments...

    :)

    nice...


    Regards,
    Eon...

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  12. @eon-glad u felt connected....ok so postin it wasnt a bad idea atall...:)

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  13. i so loved the positive aura in this!

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  14. @sawan-thanku for visitin my blog....n glad u liked it...:)

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  15. Hmmm....donno if its the words the underlying emotions or that I could relate to it... or all put together.. I loved this post! :)

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  16. I hope that the soldier of fortune does not make the damsel wait for long.
    Nice read.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  17. @manshaa-:)...no matter wat it was i m just glad u liked it...:)

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  18. @BA-haha hope the soldier considers ur words...:)

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  19. It's lovely...The ultimate power in world..Love..keep on the belief :)

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  20. Beautiful and leaves a peaceful feeling...

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  22. @alcina-heyya....welcome back...n glad u liked it...:)

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