Rejected and dejected,
He fell on the ground
When the King’s gardener
Let him slip away,
And admired the bouquet
His friends made.
Silently sobbing
He lay on the ground
Thinking of the princely vase
Whose comfort was gifted,
To his friends, by Fates.
Fates- who played with his existence.
Suddenly picked up,
By an innocent toddler of three-
Who rushed to his Mother
Holding this precious gift.
‘Happy birthday Ma’
Was all, the flower heard,
And knew his destiny was
Rosier than the others.
While his friends withered
In a princely corner, unnoticed,
He was a part of the purest
Relation on the Earth.
Now his friends are buried
Deep down under, soiled.
And his dried petals still find
A place in a family album.
Since that day he silently sings,
Not heard by many though,
“Some grapes might be sour, but not all,
‘Rejection’, really, is not
that cold.”-Vaisakhi Mishra
woooow... just wooow.... I love you thinking... Such a fabulous way you expressed.... fan hogaya yaar tujhe mi... :)
ReplyDeletethanku so much....:)...n thanx 4 visitin...:)
Deletewonderful. thats a new definition to rejection actually :)
ReplyDeletethe flow was good and indeed the thought behind was mature and optimistic. well done!
sarah
thanku so much...glad u liked it...hehe i always believe rejection is not actually bad...everythin has a key to a door which u might find in ur path of life...all we need is to be positive and patient...:)
DeleteMature thought indeed...You write less but really good.
ReplyDeleteAbhi
WE HAVE A STORY
thanx...ya ryt i write very less...guess i wrote this after a month an a half...but glad u guys still remember me...tat makes me write always...:)
DeleteOMG ..rejected ..i dont like this word ..coz i have a grt experience .. well written ..Mate ..
ReplyDeletethanx a ton...guess no one likes this word...i hate it too coz its like life ditches me the most wen i need its support...neways glad u liked it...n thanx 4 visitin...:)
DeleteLovely Vaisakhi...You are an awesome poetess
ReplyDeletethanku so much dear...:)
DeleteThis is lovely work of literature...
ReplyDeletethanx...:)
DeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery of this is beautiful. Love yellow...it's one of my favorite colors. The petals of the rose, once discarded, now lives on as dried flowers of love.
Nicely expressed.
Thanks for sharing & visiting.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
thanku so much...glad u liked it..:)
DeleteHey, Hi
ReplyDeleterejection by one, but accepted by another....it just proves that wat we consider the best may not be the best, theres something better waiting...
:)
naice...
Regards,
Eon..
exactly....theres always somethin waitin 4 us somewhr...all we need is patience and not to let our moral down...:)...glad u liked it...
Deletewonderfully written and beautifully said! such a positive piece vaisakhi! love it!
ReplyDeletehope you are well
Hope
thanx a lot hope...:)...glad u liked it...n ya m well...sorry couldnt keep contact 4 quite sometime...got a bit busy...but now will try to be regular...:)
DeleteBeautifully Crafted Vaisakhi :)
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful :)
thanx...:)
DeleteYou are tagged Vaisakhi Dear :)
ReplyDeletehttp://myfriendshipsimran.blogspot.in/2012/03/awards-honor-and-tag.html
There is place for everybody, there is future for everybody, we just need to consolidate our thoughts.
ReplyDeletelovely thoughts... needed badly in rat race today!
thanx...:)...and exactly...with the competition 2day we cannot succeed in everythin but that doesnt mean we should give up..
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