Dots of ink, that’s all that’s there
‘Cause words just fail to conjure
themselves.
Though meandering thoughts haunt all
night long,
I stare at a paper that is still so
blank.
Nomad winds threaten to blow
The dear held page that has nothing
at all.
Still holding a pen I stare at the
moonless sky,
To calm the squall that torments my
feeble mind.
If only my withheld tears could
etch,
All the words, my thoughts - on that
page.
I could have a peaceful dream,
And a blank page wouldn’t be gaping
at me.
A teary gaze at lines that call to
me,
Pick the pen a hundred times, still;
The tempest rattles on the doors of
my brain,
And I stare at the paper that is
still so blank.
-Vaisakhi Mishra
pretty similar to what i m gloing through right now vaisakhi. Sometimes there is a storm witihn yet u cant express it out, not even to urself. neither words nor thoughts seem to let go.
ReplyDeletewell written.
sarah
i couldnt agree less sarah...over 2 months n i ve been so blank...not with thoughts or ideas but with words...but finally penned somethin...n m so glad u liked it...:)...thanku..
DeleteIt really happens to me often. But now I sit to write only when I have an idea in my head. Nice poem anyway :)
ReplyDeleteguess it happns to everyone who write...n 4 the ones who dont write their paper is always blank..:P...neways point even i write only wen an idea strats hurtin my brain till i pen it out...but 2 months my blankness was hurting so i had to write abt tat this time...glad u liked it...:)
DeleteA lovely way of describing a major writing affliction. :-)
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thanku tameka...:)
DeleteDearie!
ReplyDeleteLove reading you :)
Awesome description...as such situation comes when there is a Writer's Stop or words fail to express.
simi...i love reading u too dear...:)))...n thanku so much...:)
DeleteHey, Hi
ReplyDeletethere are things you relate to easily and readily coz u have either experienced it or experiencing it....same is the case with me now....
like always, tuned it to perfection. Naice read...
:)
Regards,
Eon...
thanku thanku n thanku.....n btw DON UNCLE IS BACK...:D....glad u liked it..:)
Deletethat's a beautiful poem! that's how I used to be when I fall short of words but those blank pages are precious drafts of my life!
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thanku...:)...glad u could connct wid it...:)
DeleteWonderful lines..i like them especially since i also hve d same kind of block sometimes
ReplyDeleteguess everything can prompt the poet in us....even a prolonged block...:)...glad u liked it...thanx..:)
DeleteVaisakhi....I'm suffering from this writers block from long time....Beautiful description of that phase!!
ReplyDeletethanku....n dont worry i know once the block fades u ll come up wid ur beautiful writings again...:)
DeleteYou conjured a lot of images on the blank paper, Vaisakhi:)
ReplyDeletethanku uncle...:)
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