‘My Love, here I am’-I hear her say;
Resuscitating from my bed of pain.
In the realm of stars, she dazzles like the moon,
Singing, for me to come to her rescue.
Here in the darkness, I follow her light,
She plays and taunts me in the mid of the night.
Washed by the winds and passionate flare,
She stops in a dome to meet my stare.
She calls me along, like the goddess of love.
Hypnotized I follow; together now, like two doves.
Her skin is soft, caution in my touch;
I burn like fire; she smiles like a murmuring rose.
‘Close your eyes My Love’-I do as she says,
‘My love is for you, forever, from this day.’
I tighten my embrace, she shivers with life.
I wish for a kiss, she invites without strife.
I feel the darkness scurrying away.
Golden beams dancing: inviting the day.
Eyes shut; I go on for my wish.
Gone; all I hear is an airy hiss.
-VAISAKHI MISHRA
really well written leaves so much to the reader to interpret.. I read as death being the women he follows into the light
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ReplyDeleteHey,
ReplyDeleteYour choice of apt words..so apt.. :)
For me it was like a song, starting and coming to an end with the same feel... And the lines in between- telling a story :)
Very nice!!
Excellent Vaisakhi......Like this one a lot :D
ReplyDelete@jim-lovely interpretation....:)...glad u liked it...:)
ReplyDelete@manshaa-thanx....hope u liked the in between story...:)
ReplyDelete@abhishek-glad u liked it....:)
ReplyDelete@ Vaisakhi:
ReplyDeleteYes I liked the story too, the choice of words made it even beautiful! Dreamy, playful, and romantic... :-)
Loved it Varsha it felt you were telling a tale and it sounded mystic and romantic at the same time!
ReplyDeleteNice one :)
Take Care.
Wow...what a rhyming...I feel like I'm singing when I'm reading...It's like a story like poem...beautifully written :)
ReplyDelete@manshaa-hehe...i was just kiddin...neways thanx a lot...:)
ReplyDelete@fatima-thanku so much....n glad u found it romantic...;)
ReplyDelete@valli-thanx a lot...:)
ReplyDelete:O
ReplyDeleteGone? Beautiful and just when I thought they had it all, it was gone, in thin air.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@BA-hehe yup gone....:)
ReplyDeletethanku so much 4 the visit....:)
what a brilliantly written piece. Enjoyed it very much! thank you!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, very expressive,but the end made me shudder..
ReplyDelete@hope-glad u enjoyed it....:)
ReplyDelete@DI-thanku so much...:)
ReplyDeleteA rendezvous though ended, but the love will not!
ReplyDeleteTruly lovely :)
@poonam di-glad u liked it...:)
ReplyDeleteCn I gt ur copyryts :P
ReplyDelete@somya-i ll have to think...:P
ReplyDeleteexcellent rhythm! wonderful to read ...
ReplyDeleteits a pleasant poem i must say !
:)
@sowmya-thanx....:)
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