Thursday, April 21, 2011

LOVE CONFESSION



Passion filled winds whizzing across,
En life this heavenly wilderness.
Murmuring grass profoundly sings
Of ages and ballads of love.

Whispering and holding in tender touch,
Confession flows out of your heart.
Perched on delicate branch of love,
We steal this moment away from world.

Under the canopy of bright blue sky,
Our hearts greet their entwined fate.
Like two dew drops on a fallen leaf
Wanting, to coalesce into one.

Conversing with silence, you stare at me.
Dappled with darnels, our silhouettes meet.
Conquered by ecstasy, as sun bids adieu,
I seal the day with my first kiss.

-VAISAKHI MISHRA

20 comments:

  1. sensual....i guess dis iz d first tym ur line of thought has shifted to romance....a very gud and graceful attempt....:)

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  2. Under the canopy of bright blue sky,
    Our hearts greet their entwined fate.
    Like two dew drops on a fallen leaf
    Wanting, to coalesce into one.
    wow a thoughtful poem having a romantic touch .. lovely

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  3. @appu-yup attempted to write somethin romantic 4 the 1st time...:)...glad u liked it....:)

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  4. @some unspoken words-thanx...:)

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  5. Woha! Superb girl!

    Each word was as pure as the first kiss described :)

    Your new template and mood of blog is really perky..after reading this poem and seeing the change of your template i so feel that you are in love :P

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  6. You finally posted this one out here !
    Its wonderful and sensuous as I told ya before...
    write more on such stuff rather than dark, it feels good to read and comment too :)

    And also leaves the reader with a smile on his/her face :)

    Take Care.

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  7. @alcina-hehe thanx a lot.....n well just confirmin....i m not in love...:)....

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  8. @fatima-yup i finally posted it here....i knew u had been waitin 4 this one...n hmm i ll surely try to write more of such poems...dont worry...UR TYPE....:p...

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  9. Super awesome poem Vaisakhi....your romantic side is also very beautiful...Like it :D

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  10. @abhishek-hehe glad u liked my romantic side..:)

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  11. Hey, Hi
    i simply remeber reading this before, but i still dont know why i didnt comment!!
    hmm, i liked the flow you have given to this poetry...its good, the imagery is nice too...over all it has a nice sweet feel to it..

    Nice.

    Regards,
    The Silhouette..

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  12. @silhouette-thanku so much 4 ur commnt...n i can guess y u didnt commnt earlier...u were a bit preoccupied i know...:)

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  13. OFfo!...this post is so romantic....Keep writing Vaisakhi..:)

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  14. Lovely post... Its a pleasant surprise from u :)

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  15. @rafaa-hehe thought ud like it...thanx 4 tat commnt....:)

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  16. Feelings were impeccable.. gr8 going.. :)

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  17. @monu-thanku so much....n welcome to my blog....:)

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