Wednesday, January 5, 2011

ENDLESS WAIT...

relate to this musical piece


Winds flow with tinge of love
Sky is doomed with self alone
I stare and wait to be with you
And Hope rekindle in my soul-

Time flies with swift birds
Burning sun is off with dusk
My tears shimmer in twilight’s flare
Still Hope rekindle in my soul-

Whispering springs remind me of you
Memories of you touch me like dew
I greet the moon with my rising despair
But I let Hope rekindle in my soul.

You and I will be together again
Wallow in snow, sing in rain
Till then I’ll stay with my endless wait
And wait and wait, till when I can.

-VAISAKHI MISHRA
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10 comments:

  1. MeherJanuary 5, 2011 at 10:01 PM

    I like your poem scheme. Very flowy.

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  2. UnknownJanuary 5, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    g8t work once again vaisakhi..keep it up

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  3. FatimaJanuary 5, 2011 at 11:22 PM

    Hey the poem is awesome...the best I've read so far !

    And I guess this is my last comment from this account as I'm deleting my account...2-3 times plagiarism in a row and now I'm scared of publishing my work on my blog..hence deleting it...

    Keep Writing,
    Fatima

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  4. ApekshaJanuary 5, 2011 at 11:37 PM

    ur choice of words n d way u weave dem in2 a beutiful poetic form is really commendable.........gud job again........waitin 4 more.........:)

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  5. Eon HeathJanuary 6, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    Hey, Hi
    Beautiful...like i mentioned in one of my previous comments, you are a serious writer, you give thought to what you write and try to complete it...it has come out real beautifully...

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  6. Eon HeathJanuary 6, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    p.s. there is something regarding this post that i needed to share, i couldnt find any email id mentioned here..posting it here would not be appropriate i believe...

    my id is cyclone.phyan@gmail.com

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  7. VaisakhiJanuary 6, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    thanku everyone

    @fatima-i know re....even i m scared so have decided to post only few ones over here now..

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  8. VaisakhiJanuary 6, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    @SILHOUETTE- I planned to drop 'S' realizin anothr way to emphasize....:)

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  9. AishwaryaJanuary 6, 2011 at 10:29 PM

    the word construction is perfect.. when i tried to sing it out, i could feel the words, feel the meaning... wid music, the poem sounds lyk magic!!

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  10. Arundhati ChatterjeeJanuary 15, 2011 at 4:02 PM

    Wonderful... Lovely... Rhythmic.. and the name of the poem in itself makes u feel like reading more of it !

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