A red aura and a glowing face;
Love silently chiming along the church bells;
Transfixed, yet blushing with a shining gaze,
Gracefully you pave the flower trail.
Smiling like a blooming morning glow,
Telling me of love that we redefined;
Staring with an emotion – I just don’t know;
I hear your heart pounding in rhythm with mine.
The crowded world fades into unwantedness,
All I see is you, my princess to be.
The serene white dimmed by your innocence,
I feel the silence simply conversing with me.
Nothing matters to me, nothing at all,
As I see you now, walking down the aisle.
-VAISAKHI MISHRA
P.S.- unwantedness is no actual word...i just used it to tell about the feeling strongly in a word...
P.S.- unwantedness is no actual word...i just used it to tell about the feeling strongly in a word...
nice..loved it
ReplyDeleteWhat a romantic poem. you have expressed so beautifully the anticipation of a woman on her wedding.
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This is so beautiful. :-)
ReplyDeleteReally Beautiful:)
ReplyDeletethat was so cute. liked it
ReplyDeletethey flow was nice...it spoke of possesiveness and desire :) good wrk!
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The groom staring at his bride to be walking down the aisle, all mesmerized and saying these words, I could imagine that :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful narrative post.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@ sneha,rimly, irene,simi, saru, some unspoken words and subtlescribbler-thanku so much....glad u guys liked it...:)
ReplyDelete@BA-bingo....tat was exactly wat was on my mind we i wrote it....glad u liked it...:)
ReplyDeleteawww.....itz so magical.....u've so aptly decribed d moments and feelings d groom goes thru on his marriage day!!!!
ReplyDelete@apu-thanx dear...:)
ReplyDeleteSerene!!!
ReplyDeleteThe song that played after reading was 'Its gonna be love' am sure you must have listened to it..from the movie A walk to remember :)
@beyond horizon-thanx di....n yes i know tat song....n love the movie too...:)
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ReplyDeletewell penned! :)
@sowmya-thanku...n welcome to my blog...:)
ReplyDeleteIts magical and hey you took this pic only wow :)
ReplyDeleteRomantic is the word, and coming from you varsha...I find something fishy chal kya raha hai haan :P
Nice one !!
Take care.
@fatima-"welcome back"...:P....n thanku so much 4 likin it n helpin me select the pick.....n yes "i m in love"...:P....kiddin re....dont worry u ll be among the 1st people to know if nethin fishy happens...:)
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ReplyDeletewhen its poetry, dont really worry about the words perfection....for even the world we weave in it may be surreal.. :)
one thought, one moment...u described it beautifully....haaa, i should get married in a church....
Regards,
Eon...
@eon-haha surreal works 4 me a lot...:P....glad u found it beautiful....n hey ya do get married in church...n dont 4get to invite me...:)
ReplyDeleteIt all feels so perfect and divine before the disaster :P
ReplyDeletefor the post, Bright, pure.. surreal !
aJ
@aakash-lolz....hmm yup good feel before the catastrophe anticipated by many...:)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful poem Vaisakhi :)
ReplyDeletethanx valli...:)
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