Thursday, August 18, 2011

I SEE YOU...



A red aura and a glowing face;
Love silently chiming along the church bells;
Transfixed, yet blushing with a shining gaze,
Gracefully you pave the flower trail.

Smiling like a blooming morning glow,
Telling me of love that we redefined;
Staring with an emotion – I just don’t know;
I hear your heart pounding in rhythm with mine.

The crowded world fades into unwantedness,
All I see is you, my princess to be.
The serene white dimmed by your innocence,
I feel the silence simply conversing with me.

Nothing matters to me, nothing at all,
As I see you now, walking down the aisle.

-VAISAKHI MISHRA




P.S.- unwantedness is no actual word...i just used it to tell about the feeling strongly in a word...

24 comments:

  1. What a romantic poem. you have expressed so beautifully the anticipation of a woman on her wedding.

    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/08/five-people-you-meet-in-heaven.html

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  2. they flow was nice...it spoke of possesiveness and desire :) good wrk!

    sarah

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  3. The groom staring at his bride to be walking down the aisle, all mesmerized and saying these words, I could imagine that :)

    Beautiful narrative post.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. @ sneha,rimly, irene,simi, saru, some unspoken words and subtlescribbler-thanku so much....glad u guys liked it...:)

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  5. @BA-bingo....tat was exactly wat was on my mind we i wrote it....glad u liked it...:)

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  6. awww.....itz so magical.....u've so aptly decribed d moments and feelings d groom goes thru on his marriage day!!!!

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  7. Serene!!!

    The song that played after reading was 'Its gonna be love' am sure you must have listened to it..from the movie A walk to remember :)

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  8. @beyond horizon-thanx di....n yes i know tat song....n love the movie too...:)

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  9. @sowmya-thanku...n welcome to my blog...:)

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  10. Its magical and hey you took this pic only wow :)
    Romantic is the word, and coming from you varsha...I find something fishy chal kya raha hai haan :P

    Nice one !!

    Take care.

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  11. @fatima-"welcome back"...:P....n thanku so much 4 likin it n helpin me select the pick.....n yes "i m in love"...:P....kiddin re....dont worry u ll be among the 1st people to know if nethin fishy happens...:)

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  12. Hey, Hi
    when its poetry, dont really worry about the words perfection....for even the world we weave in it may be surreal.. :)

    one thought, one moment...u described it beautifully....haaa, i should get married in a church....


    Regards,
    Eon...

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  13. @eon-haha surreal works 4 me a lot...:P....glad u found it beautiful....n hey ya do get married in church...n dont 4get to invite me...:)

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  14. It all feels so perfect and divine before the disaster :P
    for the post, Bright, pure.. surreal !

    aJ

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  15. @aakash-lolz....hmm yup good feel before the catastrophe anticipated by many...:)

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