Friday, January 7, 2011

LOST IN THOUGHTS


Thoughts and thoughts; forming and dissolving
Like fireflies in summer's eve.
Here I sit; On this wet wood dock
And swim in a thoughtful sea.

The rise and ebb of dancing light
Dazing the calmed water-
A search of line, of shimmery horizon
Igniting my imbecile wonder.

Rendition of ripples, created with splash-
So thoughtless; in the vast ocean.
Shores kissed by the waves, in canopy of rays,
Laugh at my trembling reflection

I stare and gaze, the ink tint sky
To bridge things with some clouds,
I let me dive, in water so deep
To shed out all my doubts.



-VAISAKHI MISHRA

12 comments:

  1. Heya this is beautiful !! I really got lost in it and felt like your actually goin thro all that...now that's what I can say is an amazing write up...when the reader truly gets lost in it !

    Keep Writing !

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  2. enjyd it ...............:)

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  3. Hey, Hi
    i loved the first three stanzas...the flow kinda breaks in the last one, the end seems abrupt, not the last two lines....
    overall its very nice...liked the thought that is conveyed...

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  4. @silhouette-thanku u liked it...n agreed the flow breaks in the last stanza coz tat para is meant 4 realization...like she is jolted back to her real thoughts...

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  5. I liked the expression.. INK TINT SKY!
    Imaginative... I loved reading it!

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  6. Hey, Hi
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    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  7. Ummm.. i must say it caught my fancy.. lost in thoughts, i am mostly am.. :P :)
    Nice blog!

    Cheers,

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  8. B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.......it led me 2 another world for some time!!

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    Do have a look at it Varsha :)

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