Monday, March 21, 2011

PALACE OF NIGHT





Residing, a glossy, dark endless dome-
Celebration of shimmer and glitter.
Washed by breeze carrying sweetness home-
Fragrance of jasmine cluster.

Perfumed with dreams
Black, en roofs everything.
Decorated by starry streams,
Night spreads, like a peacock's preen.

Airy and effulgent, thoughts float around
Filling the dark enticing chest.
Moon scurries behind enormous clouds
Teasing nightingales, in no haste.

Nature admires herself, like a Narcissist at rest
In this bright vignette star lite night.
Slowly and swiftly, reluctant to waste,
She captures this hypnotic sight.


Sailing on lofty clouds of rays,
Eos comes with her enticing light.
Letting her spread a path for sun,
Nature invites her to the Palace of Night.


-VAISAKHI MISHRA


P.S.:-PROMPT-beauty of night... 
hope it feels completed now...:)
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14 comments:

  1. SimranMarch 5, 2011 at 9:38 PM

    Well, I don't think it's incomplete!
    Your words are reflecting the beauty of night !!
    Loved that image :)

    Nice one!
    Keep Writing Dear :)

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  2. FatimaMarch 6, 2011 at 9:06 PM

    You can always complete it on later...
    do complete it as I told ya before...

    Nice poem anyway :)

    Take Care.

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  3. shilpaMarch 6, 2011 at 10:07 PM

    nice poem...but it still feels like its missing something

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  4. VaisakhiMarch 6, 2011 at 10:24 PM

    @simran-thanku dear...

    @fatima-surely i ll complete....this time 4 sure...purane wale ke tarah haal nahi honge..:)thanx 4 ur commnt......

    @shilpa-i know even i feel its somehow incomplete but just couldnt find the ryt words to complete it....will do it in near future 4 sure...thanx 4 ur commnt....:)

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  5. AbhisekMarch 21, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    Excellent poem :D
    http://wehaveastory.blogspot.com/2011/03/psi-love-you.html

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  6. VaisakhiMarch 22, 2011 at 12:06 PM

    @abhishek-thanku...:)

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  7. AlcinaMarch 22, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    This is so wonderful..Loved the way you used the words and personified the non-livings :)
    And the part i love the most in this whole post is the way you have written about fragrance!

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  8. VaisakhiMarch 22, 2011 at 8:11 PM

    @alcina-thanku so much...4 ur commnt...glad u liked it...i love the fragrnc of jasmine n mogra so....:)...

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  9. Alpana JaiswalMarch 23, 2011 at 12:46 AM

    lovely...seriously good...will look forward to more.

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  10. VaisakhiMarch 23, 2011 at 6:36 PM

    @alpana-thanku so much...:)

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  11. Jorie PacliMarch 25, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    Beautiful poem.... and I love that photo by the way...;)

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  12. VaisakhiMarch 25, 2011 at 9:52 PM

    @jorie-thanku so much....n welcome 2 my blog...:)

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  13. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 7:50 AM

    lovely poem. the way u expressed is so nice.keep going :)

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  14. VaisakhiMarch 27, 2011 at 3:37 PM

    @some unspoken words- thanku so much...:)...n welcome to my blog...:)

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