Monday, February 11, 2013

Consuming Love




My cold heart whimpers
For it can’t feel the glow
It’s a cracked piece of metal
For all that I know

Where lies turn to truth
It sacrificed just itself
You blamed it to be frozen
And now it has no silver help

But rosier days await you somewhere
And it flutters with that thought
Silently it sings to self
The lullaby of all consuming love.

Why love can’t be simple,
Why its castle of glass falls?
What choices can we make-
When we are forced to let go.

Emptiness fills the sorrow pools
Where light mirages memories
Truly said, light is not accredited
If challenged not by darkness always.

-Vaisakhi Mishra
p.s. this poem is also a guest post on the standing coin
http://www.thestandingcoin.com/2013/02/consuming-love.html
my 2nd guest post ever...:)

11 comments:

  1. Touching lines, Beautifully written Vaisakhi!

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    1. thanku so much...:)...n happy valentine's day...:))

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  2. Beautiful lines vaisakhi i especially love the first two stanzas :)

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    1. thanku so much...:)...n thanx for the visit...:))

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  3. Beautiful poem Vaisakhi... Loved it so much.. Happy Valentines Day!!

    Someone is Special

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    1. thanx...:)...glad u liked it...n happy valentine's day to u too...:))

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  4. Loved the poem Vaisakhi... Beautiful and Poignant.

    I am glad we met yesterday... :)

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  5. Pyaar hume kis mod pe le aayaa!
    Ke dil kare haaye, koi ye bataaye kya hoga!

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    1. haha glad ki itne ache gaane ki yaad mere poem ne diladi...:)

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  6. Intensely beautiful :)

    http://cerebralrendezvous.blogspot.in/

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