Blazing
demon guffaws at my petty existence,
As it roars to match the fervor of the winds.
A zephyr so
cold, has been set on fire,
And floats,
to my adobe, on acrid wings.
Spewing
wrath, it swallows all the mocking fools –
The ones who
laughed at my ground height talks;
But lost are
they, with their haughty sight,
For now
their ground is where Death walks.
I gaze at
the night sky, now set ablaze,
As it lays
the sepulcher of trees after trees.
Too numb to
care, too scared to feel,
I just
admire the beauty of the baleful beast.
The sun is
coming, the fire all gone –
Shrouded in
the ash of pride, I stand with some,
Left for
worthlessness, to witness a sight
‘Cold fumes
now rise from the pyre of my home.’
-Vaisakhi Mishra
p.s.-Image source google.
Nice poem!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea and like the execution - though I would suggest looking at the second stanza, it's the only one that I feel could do with either tweaking or a rewrite.
Cheers!
thanx...:)...will see what i can do with the 2nd verse...thanx for ur feedback..
DeleteSlightly sad and makes me a bit afraid...'pyre of my home'.
ReplyDeleteLines are strong to instil emotions. Good.
it does have a sad undertone to it...but its more on the lines of hope and rising from the ash...glad u liked it...:)
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