Book: Who Told Men Not To Cry?
Author: Azar
ISBN: 9781630414306
Pages: 249
Ratings: 2/5
Price: 150
Something from the book:
It gave me the happiness
It gave me the pain
When
a book starts with wrong grammar, you know for sure it is going to be a disaster
and same was the condition of ‘Who told men not to cry?’, by Azar. The story
is of a boy with adjustment issues. Raj the protagonist of the book belongs to
a middle class family and is termed unlucky from the very start because the day
he was born, his father suffered a loss in business. The book then moves on to
his school life where for Raj the whole world revolves around his friends,
teachers and ‘his girl’ aka Keerthi his love interest.
He was a topper and was loved by all till
class tenth but life took a turn (like it does for everyone) when he had to
shift to high school. That is when his real struggle started as he had to face
the consequences of not being a topper – no more the apple of his teachers’
eyes, no more genuine and trust worthy friends and no more ‘his girl’. Raj then
works hard and tries to overcome his adjustment issues in order to sustain the
pressures of High School but one of his biggest concerns is if he will get ‘his
girl’ back.
Pros
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1. Funny moments and light jokes in the book keep
you going to some extent.
2. The end – For a book with a very week plot to end
in a funny satisfying end, it is a big thing. I liked the quirky poem in the
end.
Cons
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1. Grammar – A full length novel that starts with – “My
son, it’s again you are going to be late to your college,” shouted my mom as I
was busy singing in my bathroom. – gives you the picture of the book and takes
the rating of 5 straight down to 3. (Sorry I am a Grammar Nazi)
2. Raj’s Character sketching – Why does Raj call his friends mothers mom? And how does a flirtatious guy become teachers’
favourite by literally being cheesy and flirting with them? Also Raj hardly
ever talks about his own family; his friends’ families have been given more
importance in the book than his own mother and sister.
3. My Girl! – Keerthi is her name. I found myself
saying this God knows how many times in the 3 hours I took to finish the book.
The author addresses his girlfriend as my girl almost everywhere. It gave the
book very non – bookish feeling.
The
story seems like ranting of a teenage boy and the storyline is not something an
avid reader would enjoy. This book is the debut of the 20 year old author,
Azar; and for his age it is a decent work but as a book or story it is a big
failure. Unfortunately the book needs a
hell lot of editing and serious revision in case of grammar. Except for the end
– atleast it was realistic, tragic yet funny, I personally didn’t enjoy the
book much. Might be a onetime read for many but I wouldn’t pick the book again.
P.S.- This book was given to me by BlackBuck Publications for review and the review is completely my own view about the book.
Thank you for your review to my book (or say a non-bookish thing). I'm sorry for the suffers you gone through.
ReplyDeleteI'll take it as a review to improve my skills on writing.
After all, I'm just 20 and would come with a better work next time. (y)
thank you once again... :)
Hmm, you got me wrong I guess. The "My Girl" part was not bookish. And well suffers is not what I would call this. It is my job to review books and I did that. I had no intentions of hurting anyone but don't like lying to my readers either. All the best for your future. :)
Deletesorry to interrupt- @Azaruddin- I think, 'After all, I'm just 20' is not an excuse for a bad grammar.
DeleteThere are grammatical errors in ur review ..one in the very first line and in "why does raj CALLS his friend's mom as his " .:p
ReplyDeleteThat is what happens when you spend 3 weekends reading novels with a hell lot of grammatical mistakes and then write a review from a tablet. But thanks anyways for pointing them out :)
DeletePerfect way to cover your mistake. May be the author would've read your blog before he started his story..😂😂
ReplyDeleteAt least come back with a logical counter point. And I am sorry but if an author and his friends cannot take constructive criticism I don't think they should read book reviews. Great authors also have stones screaming failures in their path to success. You need to look at those stones, smile and say I will do better and learn, and not stand there thinking 'How to pulverize this stone'.
DeleteAnyways good luck to all of you :) Hope your grammar turns out to be better than mine.
Well detailed review Vaisakhi ... poor grammar in novels is such a turn - off .... the editors too need to do a better job along with the authors.
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