Wednesday, April 6, 2011

MY BROKEN DREAMS...





A slumber hall on a classic shore-
Waves lament ,an eerie speech,
Where fears and hope coalesce into one,
Fancy, reality, like shingles on a beach.

That's where my broken dreams run to;
At the break of dawn,
Before the rise of sun;
To the dark cave of shadows down.

Where their day is spent in retrospection.
Diving into my opulence thoughts like fire,
To frame a fearful symmetry
Of dreaded possibilities and desire.

That's where my broken dreams run to;
At the break of dawn,
Before the rise of sun;
To the dark cave of shadows down.

Where my life is seen in a grain of sand,
My inner visions in sublime form.
Where wild flowers bloom every hour
To fruit in nightmares without any term.

That's where my broken dreams run to;
At the break of dawn,
Before the rise of sun;
To the dark cave of shadows down.

-VAISAKHI MISHRA

17 comments:

  1. Awesome!
    Liked the words you used in :)
    Take care

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  2. Really well written, you say so much in a few words that will touch people..I am following you


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  3. Nice one !
    Liked it...keep writing

    Take Care.

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  4. Your poems which relate with night and darkness and solitude are beautifully penned down..

    Wonderful!

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  5. wow! intriguing!
    love the relation between light and dark.

    'this is where broken dream run to
    at the break of dawn'
    isn't that the truth!

    wonderful write!

    thank you for your visit and comment
    looking forward to reading more from you
    take care
    Hope

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  6. @simran, jim, fatima-thanku so much.....glad u guys liked it.......:)

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  7. @alcina-i love night solitude n AUTUMN...:)...glad u liked it...:)

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  8. @hope-thanku so much 4 ur visit...glad u liked it....:)

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  9. wow vaishakhi thats omgly expressed.thank u so much to follow me.first time i visited i think.and i really loved ur blog

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  10. @some unspoken words-thanku so much 4 ur visit...again..;)...u had also read revenge i guess...:)...happy happy me u liked it...:)

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  11. hey its nice...carry on

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  12. wow........itz really very well thought and well written!!!!!!!!!!!

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  13. @apu-thanku so much....u got time finally comp sci girl..:P

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  14. @mary-thanku 4 ur visit.....:))

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  15. Hey, Hi
    well, i did read it earlier and commented on it too...i really dont understand why google has to eat my comment!! fb used to do it earlier...now this...lord have mercy...

    The verses are beautifully interwined...the pain and bliss...the dark and joy...everything is in proportion...the right blend..
    :)

    Regards,
    The Silhouette..

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  16. @silhouette-hehe google playin hide n seek wid u...:P...neways good u read it again coz of this...;)....thanku so much 4 ur recommnt...wish i could have read ur 1st commnt....the originl one..:)

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