Born with thorns,
Crimsoned for love;
Taken ages ago,
To witness the fresh innocence
Of two passion filled souls.
I bloomed and sustained
Under a table lamp,
Listening to words and sighs,
Bringing sparkling smiles
To a girl lost in wonderland.
My red now fades,
But I still live and breathe-
Concealed in a book,
Listening to tears and tales
Of a painfully dying love.
I’m held dear now,
With memories and a broken heart.
Not all love is true
Like we are told always,
Hence, roses have thorns.-Vaisakhi Mishra
Marvelous expression...:)
ReplyDeleteSaru
Amazing Vaisakhi :)
ReplyDeleteWow! you just said an unsaid expressions that lies somewhere left in sight of eyes and heart but somehow left in heart!
Keep Expressing ..I liked that image :)
keep Smiling..Much love!
Great thought...You've presented the other side of rose...
ReplyDeleteMy red now fades,
But I still live and breathe-
Concealed in a book,
Listening to tears and tales
Of a painfully dying love.
I really loved these words....
A thought so nostalgic and so beautifully expressed.. this one really touched...:))
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SUPERLIKE Vaisakhi, loved the poem :-)
ReplyDeletebeautiful use of words. well expressed deeply felt emotions!
ReplyDeletelove it!
Lovely! Very nice words!
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ReplyDeleteMy first visit from Bloggers group.
This is wonderful.
I like how you've written it from the rose's perspective.
Nice image too.
Thanks for sharing.
The Evening Zephyr
@sarah, simran, valli, mansha, subtlesribbler, hope-thanku so much....glad u guys liked it...:)
ReplyDelete@rahul bhatia, andy-welcome to my blog....n thanku so much...:)
ReplyDeleteall love isn't true...but some definitely are...lovely lines :)
ReplyDeleteCheers!
SUB
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@SUB- hehe ya some certainly are...:).....n congrats....:)
ReplyDeletewill surely take a look at ur new blog aftr my exams...:)
Words become images and images become words…no word is wasted here. Beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteIt is dead, it is wan, but it is still there.... do u need anything more to prove that 'yes love is forever'
ReplyDelete@gvsparx-nope...i guess this says it all...
ReplyDelete@short poems-thanx 4 visitin my blog....n glad u liked it...:)
ReplyDeleteohh great words.. penned so beautifully :)
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@rachit-thanku...welcome back n best of luck 4 CAT....:)
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