The mellow eyes quietly sing
To a slowly dying ethereal dream,
To stay some more and breathe to her
And not let her fall back to a
lonely wall.
A caged bright bird flaps to dance,
To splash the beady drops of love
That form and slip off the glass,
Of her darkened lonely walls.
A broken heart prays for love to
come,
And be the key to her self closed
room,
And dance for a while in a starry
night,
And break the fence of the lonely
walls.
The hopeful face calmly sleeps,
Hoping her dream would come real
once
And lift her again in its arms of
love
And make her leave the lonely walls.
-Vaisakhi Mishra
p.s.- prompt "the lonely" by christina perri....
Hey, Hi..
ReplyDeletewell, it certainly lives up to the prompt...nicely woven...
:)
Regards,
Eon...
thanku...:)....
Deletebeautiful :)
ReplyDeletethanx..:)
DeleteIt's heart warming Vaisakhi.. a pure treasure
ReplyDeletelet her out of the lonely walls :)
glad u liked it...n ya she is out of her lonely walls...coz she has hope wch is the key...:)
DeleteU wrote it beautifully vaisakhi although dreams never die, forever they lie..maybe a part of someone Else's dream.
ReplyDeleteand love will find a way, so keep patience and keep your heart open :)
sarah
thanx...maybe dreams lie but they r real good to see gives u courage wen needed lets u speak ur heart out just to lift a burden they help...:)....n as far as love is concerned i m not even thinkin abt it...my heart is a happy cheerful one enjoyin the freedom of singlehood dont worry...;)...:D
DeleteI like this poem. Don't worry!
ReplyDeleteI click good pictures of you, then you'll have lambi line ladko ki to choose from :D
glad u like it...ni m badly waitin 4 my pics....n boys na baba i dont need ne line...koi real acha banda mile toh dekha jaega warna hum ghaas bhi nahi dalne wale....but pics...I NEED THEM...:D:D:D
DeleteLovely expressions ...
ReplyDeletethoughts and loneliness conquer the mind with assumptions...
Keep writing! :)
thanx...:)
DeleteBeautiful thoughts.....Lovely poem and amazingly rhymed...<3
ReplyDeleteI loved the last stanza of hope...
thanx dear...glad u liked it...:)
DeleteBeautifully written :) Expressive!!!
Deletethanku...:)
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