Lofty high hills,
Pastures green,
Wide blue sky,
Beside a concealed spring-
Is a home for me standing still.
My heart runs there
To find ethereal peace;
That pours like rain-
Amidst sweet swift breeze,
Against a bamboo shield.
When my heart is hurt-
It calls me in,
Giving me company, I seek,
Of happy times, it sings
Full of dear memories.
Tired and broken, due to world around;
That's when it holds me tight.
Filling the gaps tearing me apart,
It shelters me with all its might;
Barricading the stupid pain.
The soft heat of a peeking sun;
The falling leaves of maple trees,
Remind me of my tiny abode
In the cool zephyr of Autumn's niche.
A place, I feel as wannabe.
Home of my childhood;
Home of my dreams.
With my mother waiting with open arms,
Its the prettiest home to me.
-VAISAKHI MISHRA
p.s.-for people who have to stay away from their actual home, their parents....maybe due to work studies or whatever reasons...."heaven where our close ones stay"....
Hey, Hi
ReplyDeletewhat more apt a time to read this.... :(
but the way you have penned it is good, nice...does bring back memories...
:)
Regards,
The Silhouette...
@silhouette-dont worry time will pass n u ll be back in mumbai wid ur close ones soon...:)...glad u liked it....n well this is finally not dark..:))
ReplyDeleteDid you write this for me! :D
ReplyDeleteJust came back to my home for a 3-4 days off from work, and this is the best I could read around this time now! :)
@sourav-hehe nice...well u cant consider this one to be 4 u then...:)...glad u liked it...:).....n welcome to my blog...
ReplyDeleteI liked this one ! Reading this poem, I'm transported back to our IV time...gosh you know what all happened there that at times I was missing home more than usual...felt like you wrote this poem whilst there only !!
ReplyDeleteNice read :)
Take Care.
Well I read the ps now...but hey it can suit anyone ain't it..and its a coincidence my new poem is also based on similar lines it's just the condition of people waiting for them back home :)
ReplyDelete@fatima- glad u liked it...n well ya it cane suit neone....but i got the idea by seeing our hostleites so....:)...n hey plz dont remind me of wat happnd in our iv...:P
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed reading this loved the last stanza
ReplyDeleteHome of my childhood;
Home of my dreams.
With my mother waiting with open arms,
Its the prettiest home to me.
Started following you
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Nice poem Vaisakhi :D
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, Vaisakhi. Enjoyed reading this sensitive poem.
ReplyDelete@jim-:)....thanku so much....n welcome to my blog...:)
ReplyDelete@abhishek and sulekha- thanku 4 ur visit n read...glad u guys liked it...:)