Delicate and tender, the love you hold
With smile en life wilted rose-
Charmer, you pluck all the cords
Of beauties all around.
Stuck with thoughts, of one naive girl,
Alas! You wilt yourself down.
Credulous you wait, two autumn fall
For acknowledgement of your love.
Confused still, her evasive self
Contrition-time and all.
Filled with guilt, the words she spills-
'O Charmer, move on for a better one.'
Drenched in remorse
Wanting him to discern
She gifts him-
A Better Future!
-VAISAKHI MISHRA
With smile en life wilted rose-
Charmer, you pluck all the cords
Of beauties all around.
Stuck with thoughts, of one naive girl,
Alas! You wilt yourself down.
Credulous you wait, two autumn fall
For acknowledgement of your love.
Confused still, her evasive self
Contrition-time and all.
Filled with guilt, the words she spills-
'O Charmer, move on for a better one.'
Drenched in remorse
Wanting him to discern
She gifts him-
A Better Future!
-VAISAKHI MISHRA
Hey, Hi
ReplyDeletethe twist in the last stanza, something that you mostly do, i dont know why, but, i always expect something else. As if i wish the verses were different, the end wud be different...
"Hope" is what it is...
Beautiful words...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
@silhouette- i do understand wat u r tryin to say...i know i tend to drag n pull up a sad end...even wen i m not a melancholic person...neways m still tryin n surely will come up wid super happy endins soon....:)
ReplyDeleten thanx a lot 4 always being so frank n helpin me improve...:)))
beautifully written!!!!!!!! bt next tym try 2 make it a happy ending.............:):):).......waitin 4 more
ReplyDeleteHey it was a nice poem, though love is the backdrop the ending seems a bit down down...why do you do so always, when you can make it all good and happy ??
ReplyDeleteAnyways, I liked it!
Take Care,
Fatima
superlike :) :)
ReplyDeleteamazngly written!!! n yes d ending.....b'full!!!
ReplyDeletemind boggling...........ovrwhelming penned dwn beautifuly
ReplyDeletenice nice nice.....);
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